San Mateo, California where i was born, but quickly move out east bay towards Concord where I live and went to school. The school I went to was name Concord High School. Being at Concord High was fair, reason why because it was balance between good and bad protaining to violence and nice days. So going there was almost anonymous because you never know what type of day it will be. It was almost like guessing a question on a quiz or test, but that's just me.
The atmosphere at Concord High was mostly mellow, laid back kind of school. Fights would break out at times because we had wanna be gangs there. The facilities where under construction at the time so we only had the hallways to walk through during my years there. Teachers were fair at my school, some care for their students, some didn't. I was one of the fortunate students to have teachers that help me throughout high school. Students there was one of the reasons why I went to school. They have an impact on my life in so many different ways and also because of the relationships you build. You part ways after graduating with everyone, you may keep in touch with some, but not all. The community support was good, the school help out a lot of students in many ways to make them successful.
Hi Anthony I was reading the first paragraph and I seen that i was lower case might want to capitalize that. Also at the end of your paragraph it says the school help out a lot, I suggest putting helps adding the s. Overall this is pretty good.
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